Of pale blue atmosphere; whose tears keep green Is bastioned by the circumfluous sea, A low dark roof, a damp and narrow wall.1 Becomes a cell too narrow for the soul That owns no3 master; while the loathliest ward1 Of cradling peace built on the mountain tops,- Which range through heaven and earth, and scorn the storm Like eaglets floating in the heaven of time, 1 In Mrs. Shelley's editions, vault. 2 In Mrs. Shelley's editions, mighty. 3 Mr. Rossetti substitutes a master for no master, presumably on the authority of the note-book; but I think the reading of Mrs. Shelley's editions, no master, is far finer, and again suggestive of some other source than the note-book. The sense that the free soul is too big for the universe is far 55 more like Shelley's way of thinking than the sense that servility makes the universe too narrow. In Mrs. Shelley's editions, spot. Return to brood over the [ ] thoughts SCENE V.1 ARCHY. I'll go live under the ivy that overgrows the terrace, and court the tears shed on its old roots (?), as the [wind ?] plays the song of "A widow bird sate mourning Upon a wintry bough." [Sings] Heigho the lark and the owl! One flies the morning, and one lulls2 the night: Only the nightingale, poor fond soul, Sings like the fool through darkness and light. "A widow bird sate mourning for her love Upon a wintry bough; The frozen wind crept on above, The freezing stream below. There was no leaf upon the forest bare, No flower upon the ground, And little motion in the air 1 Mr. Rossetti says this "fragment of a scene appears to belong to a much later portion of the drama than those which have preceded; perhaps to the period of King Charles's captivity, or even after his death." I give the snatch of prose as given in Mr. Rossetti's edition; but I suspect we should read count for court. That edition was the first in which the beautiful lyric was coupled with the name of Archy. The two quatrains in inverted commas appeared in the Posthumous Poems as A Song, among the Miscellaneous Poems, and never, in editions preceding Mr. Rossetti's, as having any connexion with Charles the First. 2 I cannot but think this word is wrong probably we should read flies again. [As already stated, The Triumph of Life was the last great work on which Shelley was occupied. Speaking of the boat Don Juan, Mrs. Shelley says "When Shelley was on board, he had his papers with him; and much of the 'Triumph of Life' was written as he sailed or weltered on that sea which was soon to engulf him." Mr. Garnett communicated to Miss Blind numerous emendations from the MS., in Sir Percy Shelley's possession; and these were published in The Westminster Review (July 1870). What the work would have been, it is hardly possible to imagine; but, with this grand fragment before us, it would be difficult to exaggerate the magnitude of the potential poem which was shaping itself in Shelley's mind at the time of his death.-H. B. F.] THE TRIUMPH OF LIFE. SWIFT as a spirit hastening to his task1 Of darkness fell from the awakened Earth— Of light, the Ocean's orison arose, To which the birds tempered their matin lay. Their trembling eyelids to the kiss of day, Burned slow and inconsumably, and sent Isle, ocean, and all things that in them wear 1 In the MS. of The Triumph of Life there is a cancelled opening, as follows: Out of the eastern shadow of the Earth 5 10 15 Scattered by night to swathe in its bright birth 2 In Mrs. Shelley's editions, sun, with a small s. |